09/04/2009

Free Part V

Laugh
and throw yourself off the cliff
Dive into the sea, drip-dry on the clouds

Shake
off all the stares, skid across their ice
You fluttering scarf, you've got it just right

Bright
red crayon swirl, on the cement wall
Wink at everyone's 'kind attention'

Four-
letter word, holding you by the door
Stick out your tongue and say goodbye!

You
are free to be wrong, free to go anywhere
For time is the blue-green ribbon in your hair

8 comments:

  1. (Taylor Swift, Love Story. Five minutes past two am) Would have posted it at its usual place, but had problems there.

    Inspired by the line, "Baby, just say yes!" and always, by R.

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  2. Finally :)

    And what IS the usual place?

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  3. I'm busy awwwwing at what R said. :)

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  4. Peach,

    The usual place is Orkut; whenever I wrote a part of the series I'd post it there.

    Sonu,

    He's.. well.. yeah :)

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  5. nicely done :) I like!

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  6. Hey, G!

    Sorry for the late reply. Your name sounds exactly like another friend of mine, and I got a bit thrown off that he'd said that :) Funny, hmm.. one-letter same names!

    Thank-you! I like it too. It's a series of twenty-three poems, and if Orkut doesn't work, then hopefully one day, I'll post till Free part XXIII too.

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